People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment---doing things they like to do instead of doing things they should do.
What is right and, what is wrong? This question has always been a part of arguments. Many theories were proposed by great philosophers on this. Research on ideal behavior and actions dates back to Ancient Greek time. A very famous theory was coined by Plato, renowned as, “Plato’s Theory of Soul”. This theory states that the soul is composed of three parts: the appetitive, the rational, and the spirited and Individual justice consists in maintaining these three parts in the correct balance, where reason (aided by spirit) rules, and appetite obeys. But today, we see that appetite part is ...
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