Some people think that the automobile has improved modern life. Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, it is everyone’s goal to possess a care or even replace his old one with another that is more stylish. In general, automobiles became an essential part of our lives. However, in my opinion they are main reasons for our serious problems and their excessive use turned their advantages to disadvantages. For example, traffic, pollution, and increasingly growing noise are the most prominent problems accompanied cars automobiles invention.
First of all, no one denies that cars have made our lives easier and faster especially for reaching far destinations, however, the increased numb...
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