Some people think that human needs for farmland,housing and industry are more important than saving land for endargered animals.Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not ? Use specific reasons and axamples to support your idea.
I strongly believe that human needs for farmland,housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals.Becouse human kind is a selfish creature and always thinks about themselves.Further more,human needs new resources to survive just becouse of their consumption.
Human is a living creature like animals, which is born and finally dies.If human situates at the top of the life chain,every other creature must serve for humans,like sub-kinds serve other kinds.From this point of view,lands which human needs for farmland,housing and industry can't be wasted for endangered animals which will come to an extinction one day.Some people say that if they save land for endangered animals,they achieve to protect the natural balance.I completely disagree with this idea,due to the reason that all things must come to the end,there is nothing immortal.
Human kind must be selfish;for instance,if animals can be stronger and smarter than us,don't think that they allow us to live in their jungles.It is all about war of species.Advocaters of animal rights defend that every specy deserves a habitat,all kinds bind each other to live,this protects the natural balance if there is enough qualified space on earth.That is why human is selfish and consumes without thinking other kinds.
Housing is indispensible for privacy,also farming and industral activities are necessary.As a matter of fact,human needs animals as a food supply nothing more.
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Sentence: Advocaters of animal rights defend that every specy deserves a habitat,all kinds bind each other to live,this protects the natural balance if there is enough qualified space on earth.
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