Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a
teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do
you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
Every day in life we learn new things with help of other peoples. it start form birth and end till we demise. so i don’t think so without help of people or teachers we learn new things. i think we are student still we alive. so every student need a teacher. so i think it is always to have teachers in the life.
Teacher or mentor this two words start from tyro stage of life. teacher help us in various time in life. in early childhood days how to behave with other people, how to talk with other one, we learn from the parents. so, we say that parents is on of best teachers in life. after school day how to read, write and talk we learn from the teacher. they start from tyro stage and end up with mature stage.
But after school days we ignore teachers what they taught. but still it plays very important role in life. sammer and rahul are brilliant student in his college days. they never attended any class or lecture. they had habit to learnt his own. they regular studied at home. but, in last exam they fail in mathematics subject. due to lack of understanding of math subject. after result they join math tutor class. they also need one teachers who teaches him math. because math is subject which we have to understand. as student we don t have such ability to learn this type of subjects. so, here teachers play very crucial role in life.
Once we fail or not successes then time is so critical. as such time we need some one who guide us properly and bring us on right path. in this time mentor teach us lot of things. how to concur the situation, how to overcome or face this problem, where we stuck or get wrong. such type of question in our mind. The teacher only on one person solve this problem. because they have experiences. they only bring you on right path.
But, some people have habit to learn its own. they no need teachers or guidance’s. i think they are special talented people. once they fail they never give up such situation. but , some how they distracted in his personal life. Because fight with not success and win it takes a lot of time to build you life.
Finally, we conclude that guidance’s need every part in the life. it start from birth and end with demise. so ,if we want successful in life, we need best teacher. which help us in every part of life.
Sentence: It start form birth and end till we demise.
Description: The fragment It start form is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace start with verb, past tense
Sentence: I think we are student still we alive.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to we and alive
Sentence: So every student need a teacher.
Description: The fragment student need a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace need with verb, past tense
Sentence: Teacher help us in various time in life.
Description: The fragment Teacher help us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace help with verb, past tense
Sentence: Sammer and rahul are brilliant student in his college days.
Description: The fragment brilliant student in is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Sammer and rahul are brilliant students in their college days.
Sentence: They regular studied at home.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to They and regular
Sentence: As such time we need some one who guide us properly and bring us on right path.
Description: The fragment who guide us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace guide with verb, past tense
Sentence: In this time mentor teach us lot of things.
Description: The fragment mentor teach us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace teach with verb, past tense
Sentence: The teacher only on one person solve this problem.
Description: The fragment person solve this is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace solve with verb, past tense
Sentence: They no need teachers or guidances. I think they are special talented people.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an article
Suggestion: Refer to They and no
Sentence: It start from birth and end with demise.
Description: The fragment It start from is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace start with verb, past tense
Sentence: Which help us in every part of life.
Description: The fragment Which help us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace help with verb, past tense
Sentence: They no need teachers or guidances. I think they are special talented people.
Error: guidance Suggestion: guidance
Sentence: Finally, we conclude that guidances need every part in the life.
Error: guidance Suggestion: guidance
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 13 2
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.597 7.5
Read a good grammar book.
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 17 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 13 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 42 15
No. of Words: 434 350
No. of Characters: 1799 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.564 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.145 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.992 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.597 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.381 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.253 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.396 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.154 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5