WHY GO TO THE UNIVERSITY?
The question is being asked about importance of studying at the university. Today there are not even one people that do not know what the university is. I strongly feel that to study at the university is very important and only beneficial for everyone. To study at the university is help to increase your background, future works and career. I will try to explain my views completely below.
Studying at the university is help to extend his or her background. Firstly, you start to get information more at the university than high school. You share this information with your friends and they give you some new information too. As we know the information is power. I am studying at the university and I am supposed to read so many books. I believe that this process help to increase my knowledge and to extend my background.
Secondly, studying at the university ensures a high-paying job. To work a famous company requires some ability and extending knowledge. You may get the ability and some knowledge at the high school but you can’t get them depth. Today all people want to work at high-paying organizations or companies. In order to work like that companies or organizations, you are supposed to do some competition with others. Therefore now everyone wants to study at the university.
Last but not least, to study at the university provides to mountain your career. When you graduate the high school you should choose your way in future life and this is very important for everyone. Some people want to go in business field, some people in policy, others in science. You can improve your ability in your specialty through study at the university.
All by all, I showed some reasons of importance of to study at the university. I strongly believe that, studying at the university gives us new thinks and new possibilities.
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Sentence: Studying at the university is help to extend his or her background.
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Sentence: Last but not least, to study at the university provides to mountain your career.
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Sentence: All by all, I showed some reasons of importance of to study at the university.
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