Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
“Think before do anything”; my mother used to tell me. This statement though seems to be short; it has so much to offer. From start to thinking to decision making, it covers all these areas. Although some people optimistically believe that prompt decisions sometimes can turns out right, it seems to me that at such decisions most possibilities will ignore due to not considering all aspects of a typical problem and not counseling with experienced persons.
To begin with, the most significant feature of deep thinking before making decision is obtaining all-about sight. For example, in a specific case like marriage, individuals should learn how they can get the wind of personality of their soul mate, can get familiar with mysteries of them, and can analyze situation as a whole. Otherwise, haste always makes waste! Hadn’t they analyzed, boys and girls will get entangling themselves in a hole with no escape, a hole like divorce. So, thinking about all aspects is an essential for having a comprehensive sight.
Additionally, a delighted person who once was thought to characterize as guidance its place is still preserved. They are light in shadow. As an illustration, whether youths accept or not, whether they like or dislike, and whether they stay or escape, provided that youths do not follow by fathers and mother’s guidance, they will go wrong since they have not any specific counseling with experienced parents. This is inevitable, inescapable, and definite. So, counseling is the key characteristic for steering.
All in all, I contended that prompt decisions often turn out wrong. For who experienced such situations before, isn’t that what you think right?
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Sentence: Although some people optimistically believe that prompt decisions sometimes can turns out right, it seems to me that at such decisions most possibilities will ignore due to not considering all aspects of a typical problem and not counseling with experienced persons.
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Sentence: For who experienced such situations before, isn't that what you think right?
Sentence: For those who experienced such situations before, isn't that what you think right?
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