“Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning."
An achiever dreams and he dreams big, this is his first risk, he dares to imagine that he will get all that he wants. In the course of achieving success he sacrifices a lot. However when you are motivated and give up everything in order to get what you want you never look back, this is one more quality of successful risk takers, they commit themselves fully to their pursuit. Success is never easy. It is something that requires complete diligence and effort. There are numerous success stories out there which talk about the risks and tough decisions that successful people have had to make in the...
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No. of Words: 883 350 (Less words and write in half an hour)
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.244 0.35
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 42 15
No. of Words: 883 350
No. of Characters: 3787 1500
No. of Different Words: 348 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.451 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.289 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.269 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 208 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 152 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 93 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.024 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.332 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.524 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.244 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.435 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.206 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5