Write a letter to a sports club manager complaining about the club. In your letter write
- What do you like about the center
- Mention the problems that you have had there
- Give your view on how to solve those problems
Dear Sir,
Good day to you, hope you're doing great.
With due respect, I would like to bring to the knowledge about the cons of our sports club which should not affect others.
Let me share what I like with our club is customer responses and wide playground amenities.
The problem I am facing here is unhygienic washrooms and low-level maintenance, the improper security system for female player.
I can suggest, better change the contract of cleaners and try to search for the best cleaning management, secondly for security system I prefer to chose the 4g security system which cost less and provided by CISCO.
Thanking you.
yours sincerely
Ajay
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 23, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Sir, Good day to you, hope youre doing great. With due respect, I would...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... provided by CISCO. Thanking you. yours sincerely Ajay
^^^^^
Line 15, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Thanking you. yours sincerely Ajay
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, secondly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 568.0 937.175257732 61% => OK
No of words: 110.0 206.0 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16363636364 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.23853184046 3.78020617076 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49667547546 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727272727273 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 160.2 290.88556701 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1281311676 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185334039725 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920829947098 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049574652029 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881577570891 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618857520997 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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