You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter,.describe the problem with the equipment.explain what happened when you phoned th

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You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter,
.describe the problem with the equipment
.explain what happened when you phoned the shop
.say what you would like the manger to do.

Dear sir or madam,

I am writing the letter to complain your shop's bad service provided to me recently. I bought a rice cooker a week ago in one of your shops,which is located in the GLEN shopping center.

The shop staff assisted me to test the rice cooker successfully before I did the payment. All functions are working normally by charging the power. So I bought and brought it back to home. However, when I want to use it to cook my dinner at that day, I found the rice cooker didnot work as expected because the power light were not showing after the power on. I tried my best to deal with the problem but failed. I had to phone the shop to let them send an expert to fix the issue as soon as possible. The shop staff promised to fix it in 1 day. Nevertheless, a week past no person came to fix the problem. When I gave the phone to the shop again, I found actually there is no one following my case.

I am out of bear now. According to the rules of your shop committed, I am asking for a complete refund since this is your product's faulty. Please find the invoice as the enclosed and return the money back to my account before 5 Oct, 2014. The details account information are as below.
Account name: xiao
Account number: 12341234
Bank account: ANZ

Please take this as a seriously notice and I look forward to hearing your respond.

Yours sincerely,
Tracy Xiao

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