Progress in my view is, a continuous process to achieve something desired,or its a process of making future better.It takes a lot of effort to make something better specially if that something is one's future. One can call this effort a problem as mentioned in the given argument or can take it as a challenge and win it with proud.
Its true that one has to face a lot of problems to progress in life,but they are just a part of progress,we can not define it as a "matter of exchanging one problem for another". For example, if a a company progresses it takes a good deal of hard work from its employees, this may seem like a problem to them initially but after some time,they get used to it and they do not even realize that they are putting extra efforts,moreover when their salaries and profits increase as a result of organisation's progress they love to work harder.
As progress comes with confidence and a hope for good future, it makes a person confident to get desired results,so problems doesn't seem really big.
So to deem it as exchange of problems would be unreasonable.Progress does not come with new problems rather it helps ending other problems as a result of one's strength of conquering the challenges that it brings forward.
Thanks and please let me know
Thanks and please let me know my shortcomings as this was my first essay.
Need to give three arguments
Need to give three arguments for the assay, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: argument 1
para 3: argument 2
para 4: argument 3
para 5: conclusion
Every argument is like the second paragraph, but longer with examples to support.
flaws:
No. of Words: 230 350
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 230 350
No. of Characters: 1002 1500
No. of Different Words: 131 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.894 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.357 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.536 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 38.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.387 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.478 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.816 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.173 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5