Money spent on research is almost always a good investment, even when the results of that research are controversial. - GRE Issue 18

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Money spent on research is almost always a good investment, even when the results of that research are controversial. - GRE Issue 18

I agree with the speaker's broad assertion that money spent on research is generally money well invested. However, the speaker unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to embrace research whose results are "controversial," while ignoring certain compelling reasons why some types of research might be unjustifiable. My points of contention with the speaker involves the fundamental objectives and nature of research, as discussed below.

I concede that the speaker is on the correct philosophical side of this issue. After all, research is the exploration of the unknown for true answers to our...

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