In recent years, the proportion of young children is significantly increased in some of the developed countries. There are many outcomes of this trend and in this essay I will discuss on them in detail.
First of all, elder people possess strong expertise, vast experience and enough maturity which are very vital for the nation to sustain in the competitive world. If any nation has most of its population between 15 to 35 years then it may create shortage of expert workers in every department. In today’s world of globalization, it is very critical for the company or for the state to have a...
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Sentence: For example, many developing countries are facing this problem because of the lower life expectance rate and have to rely on developed countries for expertise.
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