The number of plants and animals is declining. Describe the problem and suggest some solutions.
Human life is developing while wildlife habitats are being destroyed. In recent years, many species of plants and animals are disappearing. Human want to make their life better but they don’t know they are the cause of the disappearance of species. Luckily, better late than never, they realize their problem and try to solve it.
Long time ago, most animals and plants became extinct because of natural events, like earthquakes or volcano eruptions. Climatic changes, like the beginning of the Ice Age, also led to the disappearance of certain species. Today, plants and animals are in danger mo...
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Sentence: Human want to make their life better but they don't know they are the cause of the disappearance of species.
Description: The fragment Human want to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace want with verb, past tense
flaws:
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.26 0.35
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
'On the other hand' means However. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 31 15
No. of Words: 480 350
No. of Characters: 2339 1500
No. of Different Words: 250 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.681 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.873 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.515 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 158 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 115 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.484 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.334 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.419 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.26 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.507 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5