some people want that government should impose a preferred of life on its people.And some of other believe that goverment sholud leave its citizen free to choose their own values and ends
wrie a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns to your position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you shoild address both of the views presented.
What makes a nation great ? isn't it's true that a nation is said to be great when its people have freedom to do what he/ she wants which is morally right, without hurting anyone.And based on this concept i think that government should leave its citizen free to choose their own values and ends instead of imposing them a preferred of life.
Firstly, its every human right to live his own life, everyone wants freedom, no human want to be someone slaves.and Therefore government should not force someone to do something which he\she don't want to do. say for instance, There is this new safety rules made by the government of India like its compulsory to wear a helmet while riding a bike , but here some people might think that government should not force anyone to wear a helmet, government should only suggest people , they should only inform people about the advantage of wearing helmet, and then leave on the citizen of country to do whatever they want to do,after all its their life and government should not involve in their life. yes its true the government is allotted to provide safety to the people but like forcing someone to do whatever they want from us.
Secondly, government should made laws more flexible and should be able to make changes if there is need to change a law. there was a time when every nations government were against gay , every nation taught that its morally wrong to be gay. but when a great nation like america changed his law and make gay laws, like they can marry and and can live a normal life like other , same way government should make changes and accept people as who they are and let people of the nation be a free citizen who can choose a their own values and ends.
However, there should be some laws which the government should impose a preferred of life on its people , so every one has equal rights and every citizen can enjoy its freedom to its fullest. Take for instance, there should be law and strict rules for cleanliness like if someone found throwing waste on public property he/she should have to pay penalty, because its public property and every citizen has rights.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'after all', 'for instance', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223587223587 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.191646191646 0.157235817809 122% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0761670761671 0.0880659088768 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.036855036855 0.0497285424764 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0638820638821 0.0444667217837 144% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0884520884521 0.12292977631 72% => OK
Participles: 0.02457002457 0.0406280797675 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.22077861096 2.79330140395 80% => OK
Infinitives: 0.046683046683 0.030933414821 151% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0786240786241 0.0997080785238 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.044226044226 0.0249443105267 177% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.029484029484 0.0148568991511 198% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2129.0 2732.02544248 78% => OK
No of words: 384.0 452.878318584 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54427083333 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309895833333 0.366273622748 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.184895833333 0.280924506359 66% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0989583333333 0.200843997647 49% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0598958333333 0.132149295362 45% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.22077861096 2.79330140395 80% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455729166667 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.9731259614 55.4138127331 87% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 38.4 23.380412469 164% => OK
Sentence length SD: 122.88160969 59.4972553346 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.9 141.124799967 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4 23.380412469 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 0.674092028746 208% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.21349557522 384% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 56.8895833333 51.4728631049 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.1512605042 1.64882698954 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448984557543 0.391690518653 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.202277473509 0.123202303941 164% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0815332593041 0.077325440228 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.664512038649 0.547984918172 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.203072524253 0.149214159877 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199332368796 0.161403998019 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127270152768 0.0892212321368 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.364465916425 0.385218514788 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0235615109934 0.0692045440612 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317696659019 0.275328986314 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454989504609 0.0653680567796 70% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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