Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Major cities are the most important part of a nation. In addition to preserving nation's cultural traditions major cities are great revenue generators, suitable to be established as technical hubs and also tourist attractions.
Major cities contribute to a larger extent to nations economy. A huge amount of revenue is generated through tourist attractions, to maintain and to increase the revenue the government should focus on preserving the heritage/monuments of the major cities by providing the necessary financial support. Consider the example of the Golconda fort, one of the main attractions of a Hyderabad,Major city of India, which was restored by the telengana government is attracting more foreign tourists statistically when compared to past.
Major cities are also established as tech hubs of the Nation. Most of the Organisations prefer major cities as base for their companies. Consider for example Bangalore,Delhi,Hyderabad-three major cities of India are know as tech hubs of India. This inturn increase employability rate of the nation, by providing white collar jobs to literate people and mechanical jobs-like security force,housekeeping to illiterate section of the society.so the government must ensure that these cities receive required financial support to maintain and to survive.
The argument is flawed that non-major cities of the nation will be lagging when compared to the major cities, because the non-major cities are not heavily populated and less polluted which need minimum support to maintain the heritage and culture of that society.
By considering all the above points government should ensure that the all the major cities of the nation should get required financial support to be among the list of major cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 269.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56133828996 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40852259562 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505576208178 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.1581634418 60.3974514979 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391492923768 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172049684944 0.0831039109588 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448957299919 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237272089964 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227279341411 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 48.8420337079 62% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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