In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people.
What do you think may be the reasons for this?
What problems might this cause in society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, unlike the past people are showing less respect to older people. Even some of the older people think that young people does not show the respect them they deserve.
I think this situation is a result of improvements in the speed of reaching the knowledge. Because of that situation young people think that they gain experience the older people have easily by internet, so that they think that showing respect to older people is not relevant. So they do not show enough respect to their knowledge.
However people does not deserve respect just because of their knowledge. There are many reasons for showing respect to older people. For example you should show respect to your parents because they growed you up or you should show respect to old doctors because they have spent most of their life time helping people they do not even know in personal.
On the other hand a person should deserve the respect by their behaviour. Some older people does not help younger people also some of them does not even show a little piece of respect to anyone who is younger than them.
As a result in my opinion showing respect to older people is an important value for our society. I think that you should visit your older relatives regularly or at least you should call them once in a while so if we do not want to lose this value we should teacher our children that older people deserve more respect than they thought.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...wing less respect to older people. Even some of the older people think that young people do...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... enough respect to their knowledge. However people does not deserve respect just be...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...s because they have spent most of their life time helping people they do not even know in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, at least, even so, for example, i think, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68253968254 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16198109555 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43253968254 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1852832705 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178746797258 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931128438692 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764583412566 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114592723972 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545245040948 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.