Laws are made up to help the people residing in a society. They are made so that society could function smoothly but in many a cases some laws which are helpful for certain amount of people, they are bad for other type of people.
A particular person has their moral issues with every thing, in some cases law which restrains you from doing some thing, it might be possible that morally that task is correct. Does it mean we should disobey these type of laws ? Does it mean we should resist and make revolution against these laws ? Again we should also consider the fact the laws which are inconsquential for you would be helpful for some other person in many a cases.
It has been many a years after a law which were formed regarding child labor in India. A boy who is working on a shop from many years, and the incident never get reported. It means people residing in the vicinity of that area are disoberying the laws. Infact it is good for the boy because if the incident ever gets reported then he would loose his job for sure so wouldn't be able to take care of siblings. But a law doesn't permit you to do that. According to law you should report the incident. On the other hand the same law also gives opportunity to a boy to go to school who doesn't want to work in these factories. Considering both of the cases is it possible to change the law ? Nope, I guess.
Government form the laws keeping concerns of most of the person residing in the society, these are not made in accordance with every person's thought. If that would have been the case then no law could have been till date as there were always criminals if you make law for murder, theieves for thief and many other things.
Since people can't disobey just laws because it is also their moral responsibility to take care of the laws. Then either government must be flexible enough to handle these type of scenario or people would start abiding by the law which should not happen. Resisting an unjust law should not be the case with any type of resident in the sociey and that would result into the chaos in case that does not happen.
Changes must be their but these changes might take some time to occur.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a case' or simply 'cases'?
Suggestion: a case; cases
...ety could function smoothly but in many a cases some laws which are helpful for certain...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
... moral issues with every thing, in some cases law which restrains you from doing some...
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...ases law which restrains you from doing some thing, it might be possible that morally that...
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Line 4, column 430, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a case' or simply 'cases'?
Suggestion: a case; cases
...e helpful for some other person in many a cases. It has been many a years after a la...
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Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a year' or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: a year; years
...on in many a cases. It has been many a years after a law which were formed regarding...
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Line 6, column 340, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...cident ever gets reported then he would loose his job for sure so wouldnt be able to ...
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Line 6, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...then he would loose his job for sure so wouldnt be able to take care of siblings. But a...
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Line 6, column 418, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ble to take care of siblings. But a law doesnt permit you to do that. According to law...
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Line 6, column 580, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...pportunity to a boy to go to school who doesnt want to work in these factories. Consid...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...the law ? Nope, I guess. Government form the laws keeping concerns of most of th...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'forms'.
Suggestion: forms
...the law ? Nope, I guess. Government form the laws keeping concerns of most of th...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'forms'.
Suggestion: forms
...the law ? Nope, I guess. Government form the laws keeping concerns of most of th...
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Line 8, column 159, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had been'?
Suggestion: had been
...nce with every persons thought. If that would have been the case then no law could have been ti...
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Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... and many other things. Since people cant disobey just laws because it is also th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'i guess', 'in some cases', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218097447796 0.25644967241 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.197215777262 0.15541462614 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0719257540603 0.0836205057962 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0371229698376 0.0520304965353 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0556844547564 0.0272364105082 204% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.118329466357 0.125424944231 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0487238979118 0.0416121511921 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.19330238676 2.79052419416 79% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0278422273782 0.026700313972 104% => OK
Particles: 0.00232018561485 0.001811407834 128% => OK
Determiners: 0.127610208817 0.113004496875 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0394431554524 0.0255425247493 154% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185614849188 0.0127820249294 145% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2187.0 2731.13054187 80% => OK
No of words: 406.0 446.07635468 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38669950739 6.12365571057 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.57801047555 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.248768472906 0.378187486979 66% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.155172413793 0.287650121315 54% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0985221674877 0.208842608468 47% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0467980295567 0.135150697306 35% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.19330238676 2.79052419416 79% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 207.018472906 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465517241379 0.469332199767 99% => OK
Word variations: 50.1260404633 52.1807786196 96% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.039408867 105% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3333333333 23.2022227129 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5732959492 57.7814097925 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 141.986410481 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 23.2022227129 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.724660767414 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 3.58251231527 391% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 34.8505747126 51.9672348444 67% => OK
Elegance: 1.328 1.8405768891 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213543844492 0.441005458295 48% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126286302222 0.135418324435 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.133125968549 0.0829849096947 160% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.535608792004 0.58762219726 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.198967294459 0.147661913831 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858548928411 0.193483328276 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489953183171 0.0970749176394 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.255404290893 0.42659136922 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0844426377082 0.0774707102158 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122665022466 0.312017818177 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056600868963 0.0698173142475 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.33743842365 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.87684729064 29% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.82512315271 249% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 6.46551724138 108% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.82389162562 177% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 14.657635468 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More arguments wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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