Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
Imagination is a thing that comes from the free mind, and experience is that thing which comes from years of knowledge and practise. So, imagination and experience can’t be compared together because they are both different things. In my point of view, the experience is more valuable than imagination which comes from years of hard practice.
To begin with, the experience is that thing that makes a person full of knowledge and various perspectives. Experience makes a person wise and expert in that field in which he had made a lot of knowledge and full diligent practise of work. Suppose, if a person has a lot of experience, then he can analyze the thing which is happening in his related fieldwork. If the work is not going into proper progress, he has an idea and knowledge of how to take work in the right track, which has come through his years of experience. Thus, the experience is a key point required for success in any field.
Furthermore, imagination is quite a good assert but without experience, a person cannot imagine anything. Let’s take another example of a scientist who has years of experience and knowledge. It's only the experience due to which he will be more creative in his research field and can generate new ideas. From this, he is able to put his imagination in his works, which helps him to do his research more efficiently. Imagination creates a mind to be broader and helps to invent new things but without experience and knowledge imagination can’t flourish to take it into reality. Suppose, a business person has the good image quality and he imagines investing money in the stock market, but he has not much experience with this. Now if he invests his money in the stock market only with his imagination then there is a high risk of gaining loss from that investment. But another person who has years of experience in that field and invests money in that field then he will absolutely get profit from his investment. So, in that way experience is more valuable assert than imagination.
However, an opponent of this can argue that imagination is the only thing from which many valuable inventions are made. He will cite the example of tesla who had changed the world into a new era, at the same he fails to notice that the achievement made by a tesla was with her years of experiment and industrious work from which he gains a lot of experience and this experience helped him to get success in his field.
In sum, from experience, one can analyze things in a particular way which makes progress in that field. Another thing is that only with the imagination a person can’t make effort to make his imagination into reality, but if he has experience then he will be able to make his dreams in reality/
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, another thing, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 35.0 12.9106741573 271% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2266.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69151138716 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68368986164 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.385093167702 0.4932671777 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 717.3 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8017447665 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.904761905 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224892970054 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980402503943 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642776413086 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15132220436 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750363317961 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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