Today's era is technologically advanced and it is remarkably making people's lives easier and comfortable. Today people rely more on the technology to solve their problems. It is just that people are just taking help of the technology and not letting technology do all the work.
Even the computers and robots need human assistance to solve a problem. Definitely being depended on technology will result in lower self thought process at some point of time but also technologies gives various solutions to solve a problem and usually these solutions are fed by the humans themselves.
As the technology advances it makes humans more lethargic but does not deteriorate their thought process. They somehow manage to think much better in terms of technologies for their betterment. Taking an example of technologically advanced country like japan people are so much dependent on technologies for their daily chores. Nevertheless these are the same people who are making use of the best of their imaginations into reality.
Concluding we can say the technology can slow down the thought process for some but not always does it hamper rather it gives plethora of solution to think and execute.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...on technologies for their daily chores. Nevertheless these are the same people who are makin...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'nevertheless', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232227488152 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.189573459716 0.157235817809 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0663507109005 0.0880659088768 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0947867298578 0.0497285424764 191% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0616113744076 0.0444667217837 139% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.104265402844 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.042654028436 0.0406280797675 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97825168292 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0236966824645 0.030933414821 77% => OK
Particles: 0.00473933649289 0.0016655270985 285% => OK
Determiners: 0.0805687203791 0.0997080785238 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0142180094787 0.0249443105267 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00473933649289 0.0148568991511 32% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1203.0 2732.02544248 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 452.878318584 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.23316062176 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.58838876751 81% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362694300518 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269430051813 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20207253886 0.200843997647 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150259067358 0.132149295362 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97825168292 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 219.290929204 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59585492228 0.48968727796 122% => OK
Word variations: 56.082185503 55.4138127331 101% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 19.3 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6438634763 59.4972553346 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.3 141.124799967 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.674092028746 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 46.2430051813 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.09589041096 1.64882698954 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378229417218 0.391690518653 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122374575739 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0497030438357 0.077325440228 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.614117283517 0.547984918172 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18065981615 0.149214159877 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176119330349 0.161403998019 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879018637509 0.0892212321368 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.200614059707 0.385218514788 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0147852874346 0.0692045440612 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241383188621 0.275328986314 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035932408035 0.0653680567796 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.