Specialized study courses are the industry time saver. in a few months individuals will be ready to efficiently performe their tasks, or more precisely, their only task. The individual preforming this task will not be able to evolve at an apropriate rate in his sector due to lack of information and knowledge.
A topic is better explained when all its auxilary subjects, such as hystorical, scientific and rethorical factors are thought as well.
In a classic university degree, such as a bachelor in mechanical engineering, students will only intuitivelly understand certain topics, until reaching further throughout the years, achieving a broader knowldge and finally fully encompassing all related courses, such as thermodynamic laws and material strenght restrictions, from every point of view. This will give a broad and solid base to one's academic and professional discipline.
A single discipline such as an economic course could give more expertise by being time efficient and inclusive of the essentials. Though the future economist studying this course wouldn't become a true professional. He will not be able to explain certain phenomenons when encountering anomalies in his profession, and won't be prepared for the next stockmarket crash because he is missing that history course that he could have taken in a university education.
Single discipline courses sure could have their pros, for example by being taken as auxilary courses themselfs. Nonetheless full academic education is an irreplaceble source of knowledge, which is and will always be impossible to achieve if not by engaging time into it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...icient and inclusive of the essentials. Though the future economist studying this cour...
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...e future economist studying this course wouldnt become a true professional. He will not...
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...ng taken as auxilary courses themselfs. Nonetheless full academic education is an irreplace...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, nonetheless, so, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 252.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07596768895 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630952380952 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.0969453922 60.3974514979 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.363636364 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150903419047 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645517279096 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483939873959 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723079405377 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397097240575 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.