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In future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computer or television or studying at traditional school. Discuss both choices and give your opinion


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By Tessy James - Posted on 19 November 2012

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In future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computer or television or studying at traditional school. Discuss both choices and give your opinion

The advancement in technology has made a sea change in teaching learning process. Some people believe that home schools will be more in future than traditional schools, but others oppose. In my essay I will discuss both views and say why I believe that traditional schools cannot be replaced totally by computers.

To begin with, studying at home using technology has its own merits and demerits. Most importantly, it is convenient. One can make and follow his own schedule for completing the requirements of the course. Additionally, the class room and instructor are available 24 hours a day. It gives flexibility to study at any desired time.

However, the down side of studying at ...

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