A high-paying job with long hours or a lower-paying job with shorter hours?
TASK: Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
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If I had to choose between a high-paying job with long hours and a lower-paying job with shorter hours, my choice would depend on the current situation in my personal life.
That is, if I am young, do not have a family and just graduated from university, it would be quite normal to take ...
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Sentence: If I had to choose between a high-paying job with long hours and a lower-paying job with shorter hours, my choice would depend on the current situation in my personal life.
Error: lower-paying Suggestion: lower paying
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Sentence: That is, if I am young, do not have a family and just graduated from university, it would be quite normal to take a high-paying job with long hours.
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Sentence: As a young specialist, I would be able to plunge into my work and concentrate on it, which would enable me to gain professional experience within a short period of time.
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Sentence: Besides, with high salary I would be able to afford additional educational programs and courses to reach a certain level of competency in my sphere.
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Sentence: I believe that it is much easier to build your career in your 20th-30th, than when you have grown 40th-50th.
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Sentence: As I become older, my priorities in life change significantly.
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Sentence: Family, children and non-working activities come to the first place.
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Sentence: And it would be difficult and stressful for me to accept an offer of a job with long hours, even if the job is high-paying.
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Sentence: Certainly, such an important decision always depends on the financial state of my family.
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Sentence: If I need money badly to pay for the serious surgical operation my husband needs or to fund college for my child, I will sacrifice my free leisure time and my personal wants to earn more money.
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Sentence: To sum up my position on this question, I would say that my choice is always made on the grounds of life circumstances and personal priorities and principles.And in the ideal case I would prefer to have a high-paying job with short hours.
Error: high-paying Suggestion: high paying
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 276 350
No. of Characters: 1228 1500
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.076 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.449 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.716 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 53 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.091 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.396 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.424 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.669 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.136 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5