The table illustrates the changes took place in the modes of travel in England from 1985 to 2000.
As can be seen from the table, in 1985, car is the most popular mode of travel, with about the average distance of 3,199 miles travelled each person. Smallest proportions of people preferred to travel by taxi, only travelled 13 miles each person.
From 1985 to 2000, England saw a huge increase in the distances of car travelling, rising from 3,199 miles per person to 4,806 miles per person. Travelling by taxi also showed a trend towards increase, soared to three folds by 2000. In the contrast, the three other modes of travel---walking, bicycle and local bus declined significantly in the 15 years. In 2000, bicycle is the least common mode for the purpose of travelling, only accounts for less than 1 percent of all the modes.
In sum, in the 15-year period, the overall mode of travel went up gradually. Among them, travelling by car, long distance bus and taxi all jumped whereas walking, bicycle and local car remained the most popular means of travel and a smaller amounts of people choose bicycle and taxi as their travelling mode.
The table illustrates the changes took place in
The table illustrates the changes which were taken place in
The table illustrates the changes taking place in
3,199 miles travelled each person
3,199 miles travelled by each person
Smallest proportions of people preferred to travel by taxi, only travelled 13 miles each person.
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Travelling by taxi also showed a trend towards increase, soared to three folds by 2000.
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In 2000, bicycle is the least common mode for the purpose of travelling, only accounts for less than 1 percent of all the modes.
Description: what is the subject for 'accounts'?
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 199 200
No. of Characters: 912 1000
No. of Different Words: 101 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.756 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.583 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.311 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 42 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.651 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.222 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.453 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.682 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4