The bar chart gives information about the percentage-wise of Australian citizens physical activities rate which separated by gender and ages. The chart represents only year of 2010.
Overall, almost half of the nation doing physical activities, regularly. There is an exception is at 35 years old men. Percentage of doing regular sportive activities of women more than men.
Rate of physical activities of female are too close at all ages. Peak value of women group is that 45 years old women is 53 percent. Additionally, the differences of women groups are about one percent between 35, 45 and 55 ages. Lowest percentage of female group that 65 years old. There are six percent variation between top and lowest percentage of female.
Male group has different changes when compared with female. 15 years old group has highest value. Following group is 65. Rate of physical activities is decrease from 15 years old till 35 and then increase again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Lowest'.
Suggestion: The Lowest
...one percent between 35, 45 and 55 ages. Lowest percentage of female group that 65 year...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...ompared with female. 15 years old group has highest value. Following group is 65. Rate of ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05095541401 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70641432267 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4598714986 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.6428571429 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.2142857143 22.9334400587 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 5.23603664747 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313097238257 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106087422884 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622164067898 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191244816286 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458270142996 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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