The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie chart provides information on the key findings of a survey on tourists visiting Britain in 1999 regarding what were the main sites which they enjoyed the most.

Overall, it becomes evident that the vast majority of visitors were attracted by the theme parks and the museums & galleries. Historic houses & Monuments one the one hand and Wildlife Parks & Zoos on the other hand come third and fourth respectively since their percentages are significantly lower than the ones of the first two categories.

As can be seen, by the pie graph 38% of people chose to visit theme parks and 37% museums & galleries. In regard to theme parks, the table chart illustrates that Blackpool pleasure beach was the dominant force attracting nearly 50% of visitors, while the rest four areas combined gathered roughly 43% of the remaining tourists.

Finally, Historic houses & Monuments and Wildlife Parks & Zoos were the least favorite tourist destinations by alluring together only 25% of people visiting Britain.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, regarding, third, while, in regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26708074534 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67500518996 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67701863354 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6784335291 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.333333333 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 5.23603664747 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160261934202 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788807978708 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705519495379 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105605853409 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738526007716 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.