The given diagram contains a process of producing electricity in a hydroelectric power station.Overall,it can be seen that,the process begins with the flow of water from river to high-level reservior and ends with the transmission of power lines to national grid.
First of all, water flows from river,later it is collected in the high-level reservior.After this,when the process starts then water passes through an intake,which is at the bottom of a dam.Moreover,this intake opens in a day and allows flowed water to produce electricity and it closed during night to flow out water into the river with the help of pumping.
In addition,transportation of water into reversible turbines is included in the next step.These are connected with generator in power station.Furthermore, generator is operated in a day,that permits water to flow down towards low level reservior,whereas during night, reversible turbines pump water into high level reservior.
Adding to this,the generator in the power station is attached with the power lines, which are used to transfer electricity to national grid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, then, whereas, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52071005917 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.69056247634 2.65546596893 139% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.2301027273 43.030603864 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 233.25 112.824112599 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.25 22.9334400587 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.5 5.23603664747 334% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113720009062 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918229959521 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056154152022 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918229959521 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056154152022 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.2329268293 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 61.2550243902 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.3012195122 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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