Your company is going to give a special training course for staff Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre In your letter Give

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in connection with our booking of conference room at your esteemed conference centre. The booking is in the name of Khushbu Trivedi from Citibank for 15th November, 2020 between 10am to 4pm.

The topic for the training is communication skills and first impressions. It will be an interactive training and will involve several activities in between the session. The training will be divided into two sections of 3 hours each divided by a lunch break and two tea breaks.

For the training, a white-board with marker and a projector would be a main requirement. Apart from this, we would need some stationery like A4 papers, pens and pencils. We would also need some stools and chairs for mid-session activities.

When I came here for my booking, I was informed that the booking amount includes basic conference/ training stationary, tea and snack arrangements and a lunch buffet. Other than these, I would like to know what other facilities would be available at the conference centre.
I will look forward to hear from you.

Yours faithfully,
Kiran Naik

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'November 2020'.
Suggestion: November 2020
... Khushbu Trivedi from Citibank for 15th November, 2020 between 10am to 4pm. The topic for ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...conference centre. I will look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Kiran N...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08287292818 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84454745081 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635359116022 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7334093089 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140201753212 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515235410536 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442111668571 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657977620199 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408563252775 0.0580467560999 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.