Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.
Dear Sir,
This is to inform you that we, Mr & Mrs Sen, have recently shifted from another town due to office transfer. Accordingly, we have to look for admission of your kid into a renowned local school near to our house. Therefore, we are requesting to go through the application including our son's academic achievements and interests.
When we used to live in Mumbai, he was in CBSC board till the 5th standard. During these years, he has successfully scored good and secured 2nd rank in continuous last 2 years. Besides this, he is proficient in extra curriculum activities like swimming and painting. He has expertise in abacus. He has ability to make new friends. Overall, my son is having adequate knowledge in various subjects.
We hope this will help him to reconnect and match the vibes with the new school, academics, friends and teachers. Eventually, school can keep its standard of study and results.
We would like to schedule an interview in order to judge his capability and request you to accept my son as a part of this school.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85638297872 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7048579526 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.723404255319 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9115723969 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2307692308 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141500314859 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412281766601 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471393485594 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698133054048 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613538693402 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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