1. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
A number of different medical traditions are now widely known and used: Western medicine (using drugs and surgery), herbal medicine, acupuncture (using needles at certain points of the body), homeopathy (using minute doses of poisons), and so on. How important is the patient’s mental attitude towards his/her treatment in determining the effectiveness of the treatment?
Give reasons for your answer.
When a person suffers from a medical problem, it is natural for him to seek an appropriate treatment. What treatment would be the good choice depends on his or her own’s beliefs and faiths. Irrespective of the kinds of treatment chosen, I believe that a great deal of effectiveness of medicine is a direct outcome of patients’ mental attitude and condition.
First of all, patient should shed the fear of deaths or negative thoughts. A positive thought in mind will always bolster to make wonder in patient’s life and recovery from the diseases. Also, patient should consult a good medical practitioner and should trust the judgement received from him or her. If a sick person has complete trust and faith on the doctor and the drugs prescribed, there will be less chances of missing the schedule of consumption of medicine.
Secondly, when a person who is ill is in anxiety, additional complications can be seen in such person and it is likely that this will exacerbate the existing pitiable condition. Anxiety can, therefore, lead to additional unwanted symptoms and problems in patient. Additionally, the man suffering from such fateful diseases loses sleep and hunger. Hence, the consequences of lack of trust and faith can be fatal and disastrous.
One more point that I would like to make is that different people show different reactions to a medicine. A drug, a medical treatment and related medical procedures work smoothly only when other health parameters are stable. Therefore, in my conclusion, I would like to state that we should seek medical service by keeping a faith in the system and should realise early that our own psychological reactions can determine the course of our health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...and the drugs prescribed, there will be less chances of missing the schedule of cons...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257763975155 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.114906832298 0.155533422707 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114906832298 0.0946595960268 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0248447204969 0.0501214627716 50% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0434782608696 0.0437548338989 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108695652174 0.122226691241 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0186335403727 0.0403226058552 46% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.94124138295 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0186335403727 0.0326793684256 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0869565217391 0.0861772015684 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0465838509317 0.021408717616 218% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0155279503106 0.011925033212 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1724.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 316.048096192 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09187279152 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385159010601 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.3074204947 0.28420135186 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204946996466 0.203846283523 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141342756184 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94124138295 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 61.1961394915 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2142857143 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4013660088 49.517814964 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.142857143 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 50.9563351843 49.1944974215 104% => OK
Elegance: 2.10169491525 1.69124875643 124% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261110006425 0.332605444948 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0866963686947 0.102741220458 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0740821224531 0.0668466124924 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525713420339 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120420204502 0.148594505496 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106383757844 0.134430193775 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066445546132 0.0742795772207 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307785914304 0.324371583561 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0588480364542 0.0638462369009 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178367796282 0.228012699653 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407939914165 0.058150111329 70% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.