Nowadays, we are living in a world where people's mental health is a heated issue and often discussed.
It is commonly believed that people living in today's modern world are under a lot of pressure and the stress in their lives is increasing significantly.
While this problem could be triggered from many reasons, a number of viable solutions could be adopted to tackle them.
First and foremost, the main problem causing the pressure in people's life is financial burdens. When people have less income than their expenditure needed to pay for many things such as children's school fee, electronic payment or rented house. It makes they have a tendency to overthink about life cost and try to find the best way to improve this situation.
Another compelling reasons is the traffic congestion can result in tensions when they have to go to school, office or college. In rush hour, people have to struggle and waste o lot of time to reach their destination, and at the end, they lost a fresh mind and appearance to start a new day.
Given the aforementioned setbacks, it is highly recommended that several remedies should be implemented to alleviate the problems.
One of the effective solution is that the government should reduce the taxes of some grocery items and also public services.
Another possible method is to encourage people to use public transports. By this way, we not only protect the environment from air pollution but also reduce the number of individual transportations which is the main reasons causing traffic jam.
In conclusion, the increase of pressure in the life could result in some issues, yet there would be a number of feasible methods to solve the problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... pollution but also reduce the number of individual transportations which is the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96830985915 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7182437232 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5972728264 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303005086198 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909045557397 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659058872768 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114686405772 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698522751259 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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