Air and water polluted in many advanced countries due to manufacturing and building. On the one hand, it provides employment opportunities and wealth generation, on the other hand, it causes environmental deterioration. In this essay, I will suggest some possible solutions avoid them.
Firstly, no one can deny that industry sector has a great impact on the environment. Because of producing significant amounts of smoke and wastes, it is better to use filters in factory pipes which collect toxic substances. So, these filters may stop causing air pollution by trying to filter the exhaust. Meanwhile, treatment of wastes and disposals of pollutants according to environmental regulations can be very useful for reducing pollution.
Secondly, construction has a negative effect, too. The materials selected for building also influence the environment. In this case, choosing the appropriate combination of materials which is environmentally preferred can decrease the overall effect. Moreover, controlling water runoff from construction sites have vital importance.
To conclude, because of air and water are our most valuable resources for living, each of us must protect and preserve the environment, and I hope that governments and other authorities will take into consideration more seriously.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'in fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266968325792 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.149321266968 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0723981900452 0.0946595960268 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0588235294118 0.0501214627716 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0361990950226 0.0437548338989 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10407239819 0.122226691241 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0452488687783 0.0403226058552 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.28054212551 2.80594681477 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0226244343891 0.0326793684256 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0814479638009 0.0861772015684 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0316742081448 0.021408717616 148% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00904977375566 0.011925033212 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1308.0 1933.35771543 68% => OK
No of words: 194.0 316.048096192 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.74226804124 6.12580529183 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20517956788 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.432989690722 0.374742101984 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.376288659794 0.28420135186 132% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.298969072165 0.203846283523 147% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.221649484536 0.137316102897 161% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28054212551 2.80594681477 117% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.037074148 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701030927835 0.56093040696 125% => OK
Word variations: 80.7304940057 60.7387585426 133% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 16.1666666667 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6989048474 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 127.492653851 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 53.795532646 49.1944974215 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.7037037037 1.69124875643 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290137730943 0.332605444948 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0402989158559 0.102741220458 39% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0593864429447 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50609330571 0.534860350844 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18713299306 0.148594505496 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104183958716 0.134430193775 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888764928125 0.0742795772207 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.143767631653 0.324371583561 44% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.036448047588 0.0638462369009 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177982362925 0.228012699653 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04237380822 0.058150111329 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.