Cinema and films, which are called modern art, are not considered as important as classic art such as literature and painting by some people. In my opinion, I believe films not only are more valuable than other kind of arts, but also loads of people follow new films fondly.
One of main reason I think cinema has plenty of fans, who are in any ages, compared to painting and poetry is that every day huge populations have been seen to go to cinemas an theaters while cities' museums and galleries do not have many viewers during the days. It means films are more attractive than paint galleries or other classic arts, because firstly, they can illustrate normal life which are more resemble to real life, although there are usually exaggerated in some subjects. Secondly, artists, who play naturally, are able to be role model for audience so they can teach society by their performance art easily, as watching films is more understandable compared to literature or poetry. This is due to the fact that every imaginations and issues are shown by details and viewers can comprehend accurately.
The other reason that makes cinemas worthy is that there is a complex of arts such as performing, pictorial art, music and decorating which have fulfilled alongside to one film is made. Consequently, artists in this sort art have to work with each other and share their idea in a friendly communication which makes artists more happier. While other sort of arts cause artists live alone and have solitary life so most of them end up do not earn enough money during their life and dead alone without any reputation. Furthermore, this kind of art makes lots of job occupations which is really attractive and tutorial so in this modern life which most people have to have sedentary life style and job many people who are not interested in those kind of job can earn their salaries by making the film beside being the artist.
In conclusion, I can claim that film is the best and happiest sort of arts which have lots of advocates in our generation in compared to painting and literature.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7728531856 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5326468515 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515235457064 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2944036443 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.636363636 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8181818182 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4545454545 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148789724286 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646364545219 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377567581228 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106077420855 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048443965859 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.