In recent years, the number of people who have untreated health problems with modern treatment due to their lifestyle is increasing. While there is an idea that traditional medicine should be applied to these people, I partly agree with this idea
On the one hand, there are several benefits traditional medicine brings that modern ones do not have. We can see that this kind of medicine is made mostly by herbs or vegetables and does not contain chemical ingredients which could make people get allergic. Therefore, it can be seen as safe for everyone. For example, Bo Phe, a Vietnamese medicine that makes from some special ingredients that come from a mountainous area, helps people a lot with their coughing-condition
On the other hand, there are plenty of methods that could be used to deal with modern health problems. Firstly, some problems only exist only in the current day and as a result, traditional medicine is not the cure for these. For instance, present-day people usually deal with a heavy workload, which can lead to stress and this can be cured by psychological counseling. Secondly, many modern people are lack exercise and follow a diet that contains a high level of fat or sugar, which makes them prone to risk of obesity and heart disease. For that, the government is responsible for raising public awareness by showing the drawbacks of these bad habits.
In conclusion, we can see that to cope with a modern-day health problem, there are either traditional medicine or other treatment likes psychological counseling that can be used.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7803476024 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6358395445 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348902838215 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133368269665 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073366923612 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228887375877 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330700964311 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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