Many people believe that raising the price of fuel for transportation machines is one of the best ways in order to make the world greener. However, I completely disagree with this statement because there are more effective solutions, like using renewable energy and educating people about domestic waste.
First of all, there are reasons why increasing fuel will benefit the environment. As fuel prices rise, people will use fewer private vehicles, resulting in less domestic waste. Moreover, people tend to replace operating vehicles with more affordable options such as biking in order to save money.
Apart from the practical advantages of increasing the cost of fuel, I believe that other solutions are more persuasive. Firstly, renewable energy should be taken into account. Utilizing renewable energy is a better option when it comes to health and can help with cost savings. Another persuasive option is is to inform people about climate change, if people have better mindset about protecting environment, they will
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that increasing the cost of fuel is not one of the best ways to solve environmental problems.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...cost savings. Another persuasive option is is to inform people about climate change, ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... about protecting environment, they will In conclusion, for the reasons I have me...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7128962557 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615789473684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9825375044 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.888888889 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233296950518 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891442236842 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755587273667 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165245439839 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100084441476 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...cost savings. Another persuasive option is is to inform people about climate change, ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... about protecting environment, they will In conclusion, for the reasons I have me...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7128962557 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615789473684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9825375044 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.888888889 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233296950518 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891442236842 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755587273667 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165245439839 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100084441476 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.