Retirement age is the new controversial topic that has been discussed widely. The improvement in the medical and social scenario made people to live longer years than they are used to be, this has raised new questions about peoples retairement age. Some people say that people nowadays have long life expectancy, so the individuals pull back time from work should be raised accordingly. I agree to this statement to a certain extent.
On one hand, increasing retirement age have some wide implications on the country's economy. Currently, many of the countries are facing the problem of unemployment, many graduates roaming around the streets without any proper job. Increasing the retirement limit, would probably worsen this scenario. Furthermore, it will also cost government extra money especially in the case of government employees. If state employees work for longer time, the central needs to find more money for their relieving benefits, since it is calculated on the basis of years of experience. Moreover, older work force some times creates problem for the companies for adapting new changes.
On the flip side of the coin, this option can be considered in the case of some specific jobs only. Jobs like designing and art works require years of experience to do the work perfectly. For such kind of work the age limit can be increased, because it would take some time and effort for a new person to learn this skill. On top that, there are some countries who's population has more number of old age people than youth, they can also consider this idea.
In conclusion, raising the retirement age in all sectors will do more harm than good. It can be possible in some sectors and special cases only.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to being'.
Suggestion: used to being
...ople to live longer years than they are used to be, this has raised new questions about pe...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
.... On top that, there are some countries whos population has more number of old age p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98257839721 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65298006874 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8886624681 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316065754891 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958298889909 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070205538395 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195357747143 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104601682405 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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