In this day and age, the topic of work is a hot topic that is often discussed. Some people think that changing jobs should not be done while others think they should because it has many benefits. I will discuss both ideas and give my own views.
On the one hand, the main benefit of maintaining a permanent job is that the worker has a stable occupation to maintain a stable life. For example, if a person who does not change jobs, their salary will gradually increase, they can be promoted in the organization. In addition, they will become part of a certain group of people in the company because they stick together for a long time. And later on, when they have more experience, they can be trusted and given more responsibility. Finally, when people maintain a certain job for a very long time, they have proven their loyalty.
On the other hand, changing jobs helps people develop more in many aspects and know which professions they are really suitable for. When we do not have a fixed job, we are exposed to many different working environments and types of people, it helps us gain more experience and understanding about both the work and the people. Therefore, it is very useful for those who want to change jobs to have a lot of experience for starting a business. In addition, job hoppers can also learn many useful skills in life. Ultimately, we may get a promotion or a higher salary at another company because in a rapidly changing world, workers need to be flexible. So it can be said that changing jobs is really beneficial interesting.
In conclusion, each aspect has its own benefits for people depending on their demand, but I believe that changing jobs will help people learn more new things and find real work which is suitable for themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...not have a fixed job, we are exposed to many different working environments and types of peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, really, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66773162939 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57352556172 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523961661342 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8499189679 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32882190531 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113251285285 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123404017524 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21526178928 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101969329133 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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