The topic of changing jobs can be a controversial topic. Some people think that they should not change their jobs while others think not only themselves but also company and society will benefit from changing jobs. Personally, I agree with the idea that switching jobs is a positive development since it has its impact on both side, personal lives and society.
People often scare of making mistakes and some maybe scare of changing, getting out of their comfort zone and so on. There are million reasons why people do not don’t want to change their jobs. Firstly, for some people, money is the most important factor in taking a new job. If that new job pays less, we would not change our jobs because we worry that it will be difficult for us to maintain a comfortable life with a meager salary. Secondly, some like being in their comfort zone, they find their way to the jobs which they are qualified for without even being excited or happy about them. They afraid to change their field because after a long time working in a particular field, it can be discouraging to switch to a new one, they get used to the working environment so they find it hard to start over again. They afraid that they do not have enough capacity, skills and knowledge for the new jobs. Last but not least, they afraid of failure because they think taking a new job means starting from scratch and if they can not succeed in the new job, they will feel unmotivated.
Despite many fears about changing jobs, I still believe that we should experience different jobs for the following reasons. First of all, life is full of color and people tend to change in some aspects of their daily lives. Taking a new job can be great step forward to discover a new world for some people. It creates a new daily routine for us in which we face challenges, problems that need to be solved and through that, we discover potentials for our future opportunities . We meet new people, new working environment, we improve our skills when working with different people and thereby change ourselves into a better version. Second of all, switching jobs give people the opportunities to experience new things, especially their work experience . I think it is not good to restrict ourselves to a certain job, career or work field since we do not know what we are really capable of, we should not underestimate ourselves only through a job, field.
In conclusion, keep doing a same job is maybe a good idea for some people but as I have mentioned before, I think highly of changing jobs since it has a positive impact on our lives and society, it brings us experience and potentials for our future opportunities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a million
...their comfort zone and so on. There are million reasons why people do not don’t want to...
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Suggestion: They're afraid
...even being excited or happy about them. They afraid to change their field because after a l...
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Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'they're afraid'.
Suggestion: they're afraid
...e for the new jobs. Last but not least, they afraid of failure because they think taking a ...
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Suggestion: .
... potentials for our future opportunities . We meet new people, new working environ...
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Suggestion: .
...things, especially their work experience . I think it is not good to restrict ours...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 24.0651302605 270% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 473.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64693446089 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49671251994 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467230443975 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1817089402 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.684210526 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8947368421 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371597296532 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127170187547 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111949765207 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256036217527 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824455625674 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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