Nowadays, people are not only shopping in physical stores in malls but they are also shopping online from websites such as amazon.com, taobao.com, etc. There is a fair amount of people who believe that shopping habits of people depend more on age classification rather than others. In my opinion, I disagree with that idea and this essay will argue why the age group is not the main influential factor in shopping habits.
On the one hand, I agree the age group potentially affects how people go shopping due to the number of connections. When people become more mature, they will have more connections and they will have a chance to meet more friends who have own style that could affect their shopping habits and style. According to the report from Adidas, the age group from 30 years olds to 45 years old, which has the most connection compared to other groups, is easily influenced while seeing their friends wear new cloth. This example supported the argument that the age group affects the shopping habits of people.
Although the age cluster is one of the factors affecting shopping habits, I believe there are several factors giving more influence to the shopping activity of people. Firstly, income is a vitally important factor that affects directly the shopping frequency of residents because they obviously cannot go shopping without money. Secondly, gender is also one of those factors. It is easy to see a great deal of people who usually go to malls for shopping is female. To support this, the study of Nike pointed out clearly that about 70% of shopaholics are female. These examples strongly supported the opinion that there are different reasons that contribute more to the shopping frequency of people than the age group.
This essay argued why the age group is not considered as the main factor that affects the shopping habits of people. In my opinion, I totally agree with this argument because income and gender are two factors will affect shopping habits more than the age group as discussed in the essay.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91884057971 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42145420227 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.823522631 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.133333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386542239955 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145324021163 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820900951945 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266668689593 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314529586807 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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