Thanks to the development of technology, individuals nowadays can watch videos and films on smartphones or tablets. However, there is a fair amount of people support the idea that it is better to enjoy films in a cinema rather than to watch on personal devices. In my sentiment, I totally with this argument. This essay is going to discuss both opinions and argues why I support this argument.
On the one hand, I agree that movies could be watched from home on personal devices such as smartphones or tablets due to two reasons. Firstly, the cost to watch a film on the Internet is cheaper than the ticket in cinemas. For example, individuals only need to pay $10 per month to subscribe to Netflix, and then they can enjoy thousands of titles from Film Netflix store instead of spending $15 per movie in a cinema. Secondly, family members could seat comfortably anywhere in their home to watch movie like living room or bedroom.
Although watching movies at home is affordable and giving comfortable for some people, however, I believe, movies should be enjoyed in the cinema because of two reasons. Firstly, cinema brings best experience about the films from sounds or images to interaction. They always equip the huge screens with high resolution and high-end speakers, which bring clear and great quality of video and sound to guests. For example, you will never have the best experience with 3-D or 4-D movies if you watch at home because your hours are not equipped with 3-D glass or tools for interactions in 4-D movies. Secondly, most of the new titles will be released in cinemas first before publishing on Internet channels like Netflix. Hence, people who are crazy about a bomb film can go to cinemas to enjoy the film immediately.
In conclusion, this essay discussed both views regarding watching films on personal devices or enjoying movies in cinemas. I am in favor of going to cinemas to fully enjoy the quality of movies as well as to watch a bomb film in a timely manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a timely manner" with adverb for "timely"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... movies as well as to watch a bomb film in a timely manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77101449275 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56230244601 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527536231884 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.625571009 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258076883586 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907430234913 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068310345758 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166515046697 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305657028338 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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