Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job; others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a good job, while there are others who believe that gaining experience by getting direct into work is more appropriate. In my opinion, I believe having university education is essential for certain academic and professional jobs whereas experience and soft skills are important in business areas.
On the one hand, many think that it is easier for most people to find a decent job if they have good university degree. In other words, having tertiary education puts people ahead of others and this can also be a deciding factor in getting a good job. Moreover, there are certain professions, like teaching, medical, research and engineering, for which university degree or master course is necessary. How could a teacher educate the students unless he himself not has a command over the subject? Therefore, getting a degree from university is significant for people’s future work opportunities.
However, there are several jobs that do not need any formal education. Having experience and soft skills, such as, leadership skills and other interpersonal skills, can throw balance in favour of the applicant in getting a job, as the relevant experience and skills are of immediate benefit to the company. Furthermore, job areas like that of painters, drivers, artists and farm workers gain the most by getting straight into work rather than opting for any formal study. Thus, for business and other self-established ventures experience and skills are crucial.
In conclusion, getting a guaranteed job requires an appropriate background either in experience or education depending on the type of work or field area. And it is felt that people should acquire the necessary academic qualifications or skills to be sure of their success.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27397260274 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95562826019 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3289097505 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348687407155 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120123912459 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823619935693 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213247068035 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552924900148 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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