In today's scenario, more and more people are becoming dependent on computers. Despite being a boon for the society, its disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
In the near future, computers can replace humans. For example, many manual tasks which presently are being performed by humans, can be replaced by a robot. Thus leading to employment and crime. Moreover, it can also lead to a complete sedentary lifestyle as more and more people will become aware of its numerous benefits.
Another demerit would be that it would replace classroom learning with online learning. Nowadays, people of all age groups specially the youth is more inclined towards the internet. As a result, computers would replace teachers which would further hamper the society. Not only it can lead to obesity among adolescents, but also make them more lethargic as they will avoid going to schools and universities for their education.
However, needless to say it has many benefits also. It has lead to more globalized society. It's usage all over the world is indispensable. So we must its advantages also.
To sum up, I believe excess of everything is bad. Technological advancement has its pros and cons. Usage of computers should be up to a certain limit and only for the upliftment of society, else its dependence would be detrimental.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ndispensable. So we must its advantages also. To sum up, I believe excess of ever...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14814814815 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83726427869 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615740740741 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4566386985 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4117647059 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7058823529 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203905426158 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594738644612 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572936789173 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118728936809 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483618830521 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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