Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to follow strict rules by their parents. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There several ways parents bring up their kids; some prefer to be authoritarian, while others believe that being liberal is the best way to raise children. I believe that restricting young people is not a good idea. I feel this way for three main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, setting strict regulations result in resistance. All these principles made by mom and dad sometimes may be too demanding, which results in disobeying. Gradually, kids start to lie to their parents to get rid of extra punishments and quarrels. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. A couple of months ago my friend asked me out for a movie, however,(p) I was not allowed to go out with guys. Eventually, I had to tell my parents that I went to a movie with my best friends. In consequence, I did not obey my parents, instead, I lied. this situation describes that all these rules do not have any impact, but rather distance me from my parents and even can ruin our relationship. although parents believe that being authoritarian disciplines and brings up better qualities, young people hate being told what to do and being restricted, which in turn leads to aggression.
Secondly,since every decision was made by parents kids are tend to be indecisive and coward . some obedient children just follow the rules set by their parents. However, these little ones become unable to analyze and understand the true purpose of these restrictions. although teenagers are not capable of making decisions on their own, they still have to learn to take responsibility for their actions. For instance, recently a friend of mine went shopping with me for her very first time. she could not pick one jacket out of thousands, because she used to wear what her mom buys for her. she ended up calling her mom and asking which jacket she should buy. this example clearly shows that being too overprotective and authoritarian lacks children of confidence and independence. teenagers are not pets and they should not be told what to do. I strongly believe that it is better to give advice and help young people to choose the right path, instead of setting strict principles.
In conclusion, I think that parents should not be authoritarian and demanding. this is because setting strict rules is inefficient and leads to hesitation as noted above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98756218905 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81868817854 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1922414445 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5416666667 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195807456101 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556386626833 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519973577734 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121028700003 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285067821143 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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