No one can deny the fact that there are always pros and cons on living in one town rather than circumambulate to different places. If I were forced to choose a side, I prefer to put my instance on choosing the side of being stayed on a single place. To support my side, I will put my views on the subsequent paragraph.
Firstly, If you stick to a place throughout your life, you can built up your strong community which will support you in your life in the difficult phases. For example, I am living at Kathmandu city for 16 years. I graduated from the university at the same place and started my job. During this period, I was suffered from heart diseases for so long which cost me so many money that was not affordable by my self. But, fortunately staying for so long in same place I had so many people in my back. They raise fund to support to cure my heart disease and finally I was cured from life taking diseases which would not have been possible if I had been roaming into different places.
Moreover, being on same place for so long you can involved on different activities through which you can earn for living. For instance, one of my friend has been living in Pokhara city for his whole life, he is now 31 years old. Being on same place for so long, he has been involving in politics, local sports activities, social worker and so on. As being on same place, he knows people very well from the same community and can raise voice for them. This is the reason he is going to elect as a local leader in the same place. For this reason, it's very supportive to be in the same place.
Lastly, If you roam from place to place, you would be very alone. For instance, one of my cousin brother moved from placed to placed in search of living. Now, when he talks about his life experiences he felt very alone. He says, "I make friend wherever I move from place to place but I have difficulties maintaining that because I cannot be in touch due to long distance. Along with that I am having problem sustaining my job due to lack of back support." From his experiences it is clear that roaming around all places lead him to difficult life style.
From all this reason stated above, I am audacious that I would choose a town for living rather than moving from place to place.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
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- You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer 66
- Some people have ambitious dreams and keep following them, but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. Which do you think is better? 85
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...o a place throughout your life, you can built up your strong community which will sup...
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Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...t diseases for so long which cost me so many money that was not affordable by my sel...
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Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much money', 'a good deal of money'.
Suggestion: much money; a good deal of money
...t diseases for so long which cost me so many money that was not affordable by my self. But...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'involve'
Suggestion: involve
...being on same place for so long you can involved on different activities through which y...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...Being on same place for so long, he has been involving in politics, local sports activities, s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34579439252 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35028612668 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471962616822 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6431432082 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.380952381 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248874285127 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888129134123 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694704063424 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16438150024 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477759972771 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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