Moving out of parents house is an important mark in young adults and teenagers lives. It will give them the first experience of independence, sustainability and responsibility. When moving out frequently students face the situation where they can only afford to rent rooms and sometimes they have company in the house. In my opinion, a good roommate is the one that has more or less the same age. If this is true, they can conjugate interests and make company for each other, being friends. Another important aspect is the tidiness, no one wants to be around of a person that is all messy and unorganized. It will only create conflict, if this is true. A good roommate should also be friendly, which is obvious, many people don´t like to socialize or be around other people, they usually don´t communicate much and are disgusted about it. Another quality that I find in good roommates is their tolerance and comprehension. Nobody is perfect, and if one will react to anything this will only cause problems that could be avoided with a litle bit tolerance. This isn´t saying that one should tolerate everything, is just saying that a litle bit of tolerance is a good thing. In conclusion, a good roommate should be friendly tidy and have tolerance in order to make a peaceful stay.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er quality that I find in good roommates is their tolerance and comprehension. No...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 222.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83783783784 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79813496619 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.116997792494 855% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3878604604 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06452816374 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135954660919 0.272083759551 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528482252046 0.0996497079465 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058007906889 0.0662205650399 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135954660919 0.162205337803 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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