TOEFL Task 2 Professor Today we re going to talk about the debate between economic growth and protecting the environment Economic growth creates new jobs and gives people money they can use to improve their lives On the other hand if we protect the enviro

In my opinion , I would prefer the economical growth in a sustainable way. Economic growth is the fruitful way to solve the social and economic problems. We need a strong economy to create jobs, reduce poverty,manage research funding, improve educational sectors and improve standards of living.If companies grow more profitable and successful, they might manage funds to the research sectors for developing more sustainable technologies which will be more effective for environment. For example, in our country , BRAC company have already donate money for the advanced research to achieve sustainable development goals which have been introduced from UNDP. I believe that without protecting the environment we cannot live much healthier.

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