"Reflecting on your personal experiences and/or circumstances, tell us something about yourself that distinguishes you as a potential scholarship candidate."

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"Reflecting on your personal experiences and/or circumstances, tell us something about yourself that distinguishes you as a potential scholarship candidate."

My name is Chelsey Nichole Smith. I attend Columbus High School in Columbus Mississippi. My plan is to enroll into a junior college and obtain the prerequisites for getting into a Physical Therapy Program. As I evolve into adulthood, I’ve begun to understand what my mom has always taught me in terms of investing in knowledge. As an only child, I never had that big sister or big brother to look up to; however, my mom has been the best role model I could ever ask for because she always encourages me to do my best in everything. I believe that I would be a great candidate for this scholarship ...

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