TPO-21 - Integrated Writing Task Genetic modification, a process used to change an organism’s genes and hence its characteristics, is now being used to improve trees through genetic modification. It is possible to create trees that produce more fruit, g

The article claims that genetic trees it is beneficial and supports three reasons of support. However, the professor express that use genetic modification trees have some problems, hence she refutes each of the author's reasons.

First, the passage mention that genetic trees are harder and can resistant better versus pest and provide one example for justify it. On contrary, the speaker refutes this point by stating that every trees can have low resistance versus a certain pest, so diversity of trees cause never all of them be destroyed by a same pest. Nevertheless, genetic trees are uniform; therefore, all of them are vulnerable from same pests. It means we can lose all of them by spreading a special pest.

Second, the reading states that use genetic trees is economical, because they grow up fast and allows tree farmers to get quickly their farming investment. In contrast, the professor disagrees with matter and saying that investing in these kinds of tree is not affordable. He express that the farmer have to purchase the seeds of genetic trees, which is costly, while they can foist other trees free.

Finally, text asserts that genetic trees prevent of extinction of wild trees because they can satisfy demand for wood. Conversely, the professor oppose with this point by saying that these modifications trees can grow up faster, so they can compete out native trees by getting basic resources such as light, water, and soil nutrient. As a result, genetic trees can cause destruction of local trees

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put before the verb 'cause'.
Suggestion: never cause
...s a certain pest, so diversity of trees cause never all of them be destroyed by a same pest...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['conversely', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as a result']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252669039146 0.261695866417 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.142348754448 0.158904122519 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110320284698 0.0723426182421 152% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0320284697509 0.0435111971325 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0498220640569 0.0277247811725 180% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135231316726 0.128828473217 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0249110320285 0.0370669169778 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47280409316 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00711743772242 0.0208969081088 34% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00711743772242 0.00154638098197 460% => OK
Determiners: 0.085409252669 0.128158765124 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0284697508897 0.0158828679856 179% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0142348754448 0.0114777025283 124% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1525.0 1645.83664459 93% => OK
No of words: 251.0 271.125827815 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07569721116 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.04852973271 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.366533864542 0.374372842146 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.290836653386 0.287516216867 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135458167331 0.187439937562 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107569721116 0.113142543107 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47280409316 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585657370518 0.539623497131 109% => OK
Word variations: 59.7846037386 53.8517498576 111% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0529801325 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9166666667 21.7502111507 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0891615555 49.3711431718 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 132.220823453 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 21.7502111507 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 0.878197800319 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 50.0003320053 50.5018328374 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.84126984127 1.90840788429 96% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.502553594711 0.549887131256 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116699354417 0.142949733639 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0485374711976 0.0787303798458 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.626249973324 0.631733273073 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0970460795823 0.139662658121 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226453135498 0.266732575781 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729270479813 0.103435571967 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.272025876709 0.414875509568 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0510485827187 0.0530846634433 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338328561289 0.40443939384 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594238404783 0.0528353158467 112% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.2958057395 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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