You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:•

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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match

Hello Christian,

I hope you are well and recovering from your accident. As you know, during this weekend we had a soccer game against Texas University. It was a hard encounter due to unexpected bad climate and your absence. The rain made the entire field wet, so it was terrible handling the ball. Believe me! Nobody desires to play, in this kind of weather.

However, our team won by a goal made in the last minute by Joel, the coach`s son. I will show you the video next week that we have recorded specially for you, so you can watch every detail.

I feel a little disappointment about the match because, the principal strategies were planned with you in the team, and we miss you mate. But at the end the goal was achieved.

All the guys send you best wishes and your soon recovery. They want to see you on the field.

Have fun mate enjoy the days off. I look forward to see you soon on the field.

Regards.

Frank

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 50, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...mate enjoy the days off. I look forward to see you soon on the field. Regards. F...
^^^^^^
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... soon on the field. Regards. Frank
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'i feel', 'kind of', 'you know']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215 0.220444632235 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.16 0.167888034529 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.06 0.0606518309736 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.035 0.0506257000042 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.125 0.118615021944 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105 0.107062808482 98% => OK
Participles: 0.035 0.041066498444 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34038168364 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.02 0.0385302599488 52% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11 0.0714148451538 154% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01 0.0191574576366 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 941.0 1141.60824742 82% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.134020619 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47093023256 5.53046319177 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78085437643 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.220930232558 0.284621296913 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.168604651163 0.211203875043 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122093023256 0.133321485273 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0755813953488 0.0843313296314 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34038168364 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691860465116 0.622163163488 111% => OK
Word variations: 74.4734886118 62.8969750728 118% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 12.9587628866 123% => OK
Sentence length: 10.75 16.4300151701 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0334103928 44.7399317507 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.8125 90.9928171075 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.75 16.4300151701 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.613754768223 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 27.6104651163 37.5504026743 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.109375 1.13073093955 98% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452421838116 0.331212695627 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0516081252994 0.0927372745006 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0533293393618 0.0736520305886 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522662208025 0.579516596996 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1931137729 0.180689518051 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133803906486 0.122183219658 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864277483561 0.0765303033291 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.295613827179 0.211926503985 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0734854134535 0.0737400523855 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265213898072 0.203819188451 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422755537483 0.067151250289 63% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.0206185567 174% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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