the countries can survive without relationship with other nations. Do you agree or not?

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the countries can survive without relationship with other nations.
Do you agree or not?

The question is being asked whether countries can live or not without connection with other countries. Today many people believe that, every country should have communication with others to increase its economy. I also strongly feel that, to ease developing of the country had better make some integrated way with others. It is better concentrate to one field than to pay attention more.

Firstly, I believe that, countries can’t live without any connection with others. Let me explain my views through some examples. Some countries can easily produce products, vehicle or clothes. For instance it is easy to produce clothes, but it is problem to produce vehicles. On the other hand, producing the vehicles is more easy some other countries. For example, it is South Korea. Therefore Uzbekistan should concentrate to produce only clothes and it is better produce only vehicles to Korea too. After the producing they can change their products with each other. They can save their money and time trough this process.

The second, the other case being connection each other is education. Now we know many students study in the other countries. They study in the other countries in order to take some experience and get more knowledge there. It is more useful studying foreign. Of course, all study in the more developed country than theirs. Because of developed countries have more experiences. The students get some practices and come back to own countries and employ theirs knowledge and experience in own countries. This process also helps to save money and time.

Last but not least, any country can live well forever without don’t taking help from other countries. For instance, all believe that, some Arab countries have unlimited oil and they are able to survive without any connection with others. But to sell their oil they are supposed to have some international trade license. In order to get this license they are have to be a member of the international trade organizations. In addition the oil not unlimited, it will over one day, perhaps after 40 or 50 years.

All by all, I have given some examples and it is obvious that, any nation can live well and don’t having any problem without don’t having connections other countries.

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