In some countries students who do not behave are asked to leave the school permanently. In other countries they can return to their school after a suspension period. Discuss both options and give you opinion.

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In some countries students who do not behave are asked to leave the school permanently. In other countries they can return to their school after a suspension period. Discuss both options and give you opinion.

In some countries, indiscipline teenagers could be told to drop out of school and have no chance to come back. Others countries argue that teenagers should be given a chance to come back. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give my own opinion.

It is common that serve indiscipline could cause a suspension. Every school has their own rules and it is expected that teenagers should follow the rules. Even so, there are teenagers break the rules, like disrespect to teachers or smoking. So punishment is applied as a penalty of their action. According to the severity of their action, serious indiscipline teenagers are told to drop out school and have no chance to come back.

However, everyone deserves a second chance so does the teenagers. Students are not criminals. Even criminals can reduce their penalty by doing contribute to the prison. Also, it is teachers’ responsibility to teach teenagers discipline. Teenager action cannot be blamed only to themselves but also teachers. In one time education is not enough to teach them, teachers should be patient to teach them one more time. Suspension is only a way of punishment to let teenagers think what they have done wrong and think of how to make it right. So, school should accept them again and give them a second chance.

In my opinion, I am convinced that teenagers should have a second chance. Permanently leave school is too harsh for teenagers. Everyone made mistake and the important thing is to correct them.

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